Agriculture and Its method of producing are developing more and more every day, whilst, people are suffering lack of food in vast region in the world these days, moreover, it is becoming increasingly prevalent during the current decade. This confusing subject is one of the most important matter for government. Here I am going to explain this controversial issue and also it possible way of solving these kind of difficulties.
Firstly, it is an undeniable that agriculture have had myriad of progress in terms of irrigation, pesticide, etc. secondly, we should consider drastic growing population which due to enhance demands for providing adequate food. For instance, we are observing, by increasing population in Africa more individuals are suffering from famine. On the other hand, by advancing technologies some people achieve a lot of money and also lethargic culture is over coming for the time being and personally I believe due to this issue the amount of leftover are increasing.
Regarding my own knowledge, although there have been steady growth in population, but if you compare this issue with a lot of advances in the agriculture and up to dated methods to producing food, I deem agricultural progress is overweight far away. Hence, it is obvious that culture play crucial role in this subject. When one eat a little amount of its meal and leftover remain which is more than half its food, I think it is kind of betrayal to the global community.
By the way of conclusion, regarding to above mentioned I believe leftover is the most culprit among the other and certainly by focusing on cultural activity it will be progressed in near future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y it will be progressed in near future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, for instance, i think, kind of, by the way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02536231884 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88109553993 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601449275362 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.0679446419 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.090909091 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0909090909 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9090909091 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118859535901 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450373271392 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413832976912 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0682513831499 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309684069056 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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