In this day and time, it is evident that numerous people's heed is towards self-employment instead of working as a employee for a organization or company. The development of such cases are due to many reasons. So, this essay will discuss the causes of wooing towards entrepreneurship and indicate possible detrimental effects of self-employment.
Nowadays, many folks are allured towards entrepreneurship in order to entertain and enjoy the life of boss. The appetite of people for an organization is reduced due to convenient investment as a loan by the bank. Consequently, their desire to establish own business was possible. Moreover, not only misapprehension between the employers and employees, low scale remuneration as well are the key factor of increment in self-employment. If the employer didn't appreciate and encourage his worker, they might not show interest to work as a result they planned to start up their own business. For example, a survey shows that youngster who are capable to earn, choose to be an entrepreneur so that they can earn money along with prestige.
There are too many demerits of being self-employed in which risk of failure and lack of decision making are the major. The novice candidate who is just starting career of entrepreneur, might have a high probability of failure because of lacking experience of related field. Furthermore, sometimes it is necessary to make quick decision where no time to think, in that condition they cannot boost their organization as they are aspecting due to which they have to face losses. In spite of these difficulties, if a entrepreneur came out from such circumstance , undoubtedly their future would become bright in the future.
To sum up, it is true that in comparison to archaic time, people want to establish their organization rather than working as a slum for others. Also, it is necessary to examine properly then only start work as a self- employee.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, well, for example, as a result, in spite of, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12974683544 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19989526045 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598101265823 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4893169968 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.066666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238169018027 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071568602203 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062820348119 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139413861974 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303852752817 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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