It is generally acknowledged that the introduction of Technology has fully changed almost all sectors. From this prespective, several people are living with hungry lives across the globe despite the advancement of farming sector. So this essay will discuss about the major causes behind this and will give some best measures before reaching a reasoned conclusion.
To begin with, in spite of the progress of farming sector is going to upward trend day by day and the production of crops has almost doubled as compared to past period, being hungry has become a tendency of many individuals. There are numerous reasons behind it. For instance, increasing the rate of population rapidly is the major cause which leads people to the lowest point of life, because several nations are depend on agriculture sector regarding to earn bread and butter such as India. Secondly, nowadays everyone is engaged to earn more and more money and wants to say his or her money for virtual future instead of spending which is a vast cause of being hungry.
Moving Further, there are a lot of measures which can be taken to reduce starvation. First and foremost, increasing awareness regarding population and the production of crops should be the priority of every government. They should organise several awareness campaigns which may lead masses to rise the literacy rate. Second is that government should also provides the variety of jobs to those individuals who are eligible for that particular jobs because the lack of money may have crippling impacts in order to increase the ratio of starvation.
To conclude, I strongly suggest that being aware of public infrastructure and the number of population is the best way to reduce the major problems regarding starvation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, for instance, such as, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11111111111 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68095132369 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586805555556 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1905468241 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.666666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14628810957 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457847040705 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435565514499 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0814069015551 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430477520972 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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