Students should continue their study abroad than to study at home.
Education is one of the essential things in people’s live because it will help us to face the globalisation era. Talking about going abroad for the study is a common thing. There are no doubts when people want to study overseas. At the first time it will make them shocked or frustrated because of the new culture of atmosphere, but then it will create many advantages. Personally, I really do agree that students should continue their study abroad rather than study at home because there are some benefits and it will produce an exciting prospect for future.
In this modern era, study abroad is one of the popular issues in the globe. The corporation from one country with other countries open the ease way to study overseas. A student who studies at overseas university should learn the language because it is used for everyday conversation for academic purposes such as spoken, written, et cetera. People who learn about a second language will help them to apply for a job. High qualification in education supporting by skills in another language will make a huge opportunity to get better jobs.
Studying abroad will create big chances to keep the relationship with others or to make friends around the world. It will make us become professional and help us to adapt with others, learn about their countries, lifestyle, and the most important thing is open up our mind to see the world deeply with experiences. In addition, studying in another part of the world enables us to support the government in terms of improving the country in many aspects such as education, politics, economy, arts, and so on. We can make a positive contribution to take care of our country.
In conclusion, it is very understandable that study overseas will create some difficulties in some aspects, but it offers us with worthwhile experiences and also makes us beneficial to others. Furthermore, a person who pursues his/her education abroad will experience such an unforgettable moment in his/her life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, really, second, so, then, while, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98502994012 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82126973367 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556886227545 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3983739197 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0625 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306837476618 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103725465857 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129647579239 0.0667982634062 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184188591563 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11926838762 0.056905535591 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.