Students should pay the full cost of their own university studies, rather than have free higher education provided by the state.
There are students who wants to be independent and take responsibilities of their college fees by their own. However, majority of the students wants to nullify their fees for further studies by taking advantages provided by government of the state. I am totally not in a favor that students should pay the whole amount for their own studies.
Students should get various scholarships based on their performance in previous courses and financial condition of their family. Both the aspects should be given equal importance while deciding the list of students for waiving off their fees. They should have free university education provided by the government if they are capable enough to showcase their brilliance and needs.
On the other hand, students who are willing to pay their expenses by their own, should be encouraged. By this way they learn an important lesson of their life. Standing on ones own feet is the greatest lesson one could learn in the early stage of life.By taking responsibility of own study, one will be able to value money and respect others as well. Empty pockets teaches many important parts of peaceful future. Apart from all the advantages, one should not be forced to pay the full cost of studies. If they want to then it is perfectly fine.
Nowadays government has plethora of scholarships for higher education. For example, Brilliant Students. Each and every student can have relaxation on fees by one or other way, Everyone should be aware about these schemes and should take benefit of it. It always depends on mentality of a person whether they are owning their expenditures of studies or taking free education.
To conclude, I would like to say that government of the state has came far way and they are promoting higher education. So, everyone who is eligible should grab the opportunity and should not stop their future endeavors by money crunches.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 253, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: By
... could learn in the early stage of life.By taking responsibility of own study, one...
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Line 5, column 504, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...forced to pay the full cost of studies. If they want to then it is perfectly fine....
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Line 7, column 309, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...s on mentality of a person whether they are owning their expenditures of studies or taking...
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Line 9, column 67, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'come'.
Suggestion: come
...to say that government of the state has came far way and they are promoting higher e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, well, while, apart from, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00632911392 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66326376508 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54746835443 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0686322347 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8888888889 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378541427368 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114963940059 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851853876792 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206415401043 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606951765867 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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