Task 2 Writing (Academic and General Training)
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:
Some young people believe it’s best to move out of their hometowns when they become adults, while others wish to live in their hometowns their whole lives.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Write at least 250 words.
These days, many youngsters are looking for best opportunities for themselves for their future prospects. There are some, who beleive that it is best for these adults to reside in their native places., while others contend that it is optimum for them to shift outside their hometown. I agree with the later statement and in this essay we are going to highlight both the aspects of life.
To start with, those who suggest to adults to spend their lives in their native place, might argue that it can be benificial for them as of the inhabitability in the soceity. This is because, for them the culture and soceity is more familiar compare to foreign land. To illustrate this, a person can unflinchingly open his business as he is familiar with his native place. Another aspect of staying in hometown is that local support of families and friends is there. For instance, if some misfortune incident happens, it is easy to call family or friend who lives nearby for assistance. In contrast, if same thing has happened outside his hometown, the help might take some time to approach.
On the other hand, I strongly propogate to immigrate outisde local place as it helps to widens ones horizon. For starters, it may be difficult to settle in, but for a longer term it helps an individual to be more independent on his own. For example, a young person settling into new customs and society will have ample opportunity to grasps new knowledge and experiences for his future life. In addition to this, it will also allow individuals to learn other matters of life such as saving money to make ends meet and building new relationships.
In conclusion, while settling in native soceity may seems helpful because of local support and familiarity to the place, I beleive that moving out gives individual an optimum chance to become independent.
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- Most companies and organizations required their employees to wear uniform to work What are the jobs that need this uniform to make it a good thing What are the disadvantages of wearing uniforms to work 61
- Some people say that art like painting music poetry can be made by everyone whereas others believe that it can only be made by those with special abilities Discuss both views and give your opinion 85
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 89, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'widen'.
Suggestion: widen
...rate outisde local place as it helps to widens ones horizon. For starters, it may be d...
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Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...tisde local place as it helps to widens ones horizon. For starters, it may be diffic...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85396825397 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64549417988 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568253968254 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7838808552 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.214285714 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4285714286 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130821589837 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484742375886 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469870971166 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0853153195215 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401408409673 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.