Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socializing with others.
Do you agree or disagree?
Watching Television is a part of life of many individuals. Many of the individuals like to watch television to kill their free time which makes them lethargic and less sociable. In my opinion, television helps the people to stay to keep themselves updated with the current news and trends with different news channels.
To support my viewpoint, television is a great source of information of all the happening around the globe. It helps the house wives at home to keep themselves engage with the daily soaps. Moreover, it helps the oldies in the house that is deprived of much physical activity watch their favorite channels and keeps themselves occupied. These days there are regional channels available which make the people more connected. Many television channels are based on nature, wild life and teach many activities with precautions. There are many events which are captured by many television channels which family can sit and enjoy and become happy. You also learn tips and tricks to socialize and pursue any learning actively.
However, there are many limitations that people can have while watching the television; one can have an addiction of watching. There are negative and influencing things being telecasted which can give an adverse impact on the public. If viewing is not organized, one can become indolent.
To conclude, television kills the boredom of many people. It helps the person to engage themselves being at home with some entertainment. It can also help in organizing a family time. Learning of one’s passion and hobby can also get activated.
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| 2019-07-12 | Megha Gupta | 56 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 250, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ssion and hobby can also get activated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15953307393 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71382298577 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548638132296 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3061655084 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1176470588 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11764705882 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260241199685 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833133385749 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529641150038 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160196164587 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445136498688 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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