There are those that feel that modern technology has had an overall positive impact on our lives, but others feel that its existence has been more of a negative influence.
Discuss both the sides and give your opinion
Some people advocate that technological advancements have been used in favor of humans, whilst there are others who argue that it has brought negative changes in one’s life. While the dependency on it makes us lazy and waste financials, I believe that new technologies like machine learning and artificial intelligence in a nutshell would ever be beneficial.
With the fast-moving life, technology has made humans lazy and less emotional. It has made humans lazier as near to no physical effort is needed, and it's all materialistic which lacks feeling, as in the case of purchasing done online. For modern technology to become fully operational and reach its maximum potential, there are initial heads up investment and time with the fear of the unknown as experiments do fail. For example, space exploration projects require very huge capital with low rates of success which is not that essential.
Technology has helped mankind in every aspect of life, with the progress in technology it's evident that workforce output has increased as we are able to offload hard labor jobs on machines and achieve targets within tight time constraints. With modern technologies like machine learning, artificial intelligence we are not far away from a time where we could peak the highest level of productivity because of its ever learning and improving curves. Manufacturing, automobile, medical, and vast industries have already seen the useful effects of implying it. For instance, tesla motor had deployed technological advance machines in its workforce assembly which has increased its throughput quantity while decreasing the overall long term production cost.
In conclusion, mankind has never been so dependent on technology which in turn makes them lazy, but its ease of doing things and ever helping use cases thus saving time and money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 106, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ss emotional. It has made humans lazier as near to no physical effort is needed, a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32191780822 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86987936047 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63698630137 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.8311801177 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.272727273 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5454545455 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132724836758 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508105086236 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314543897781 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0785523262681 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211754417607 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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