There is a growing demand for fresh water nowadays and this is becoming a global problem. Discuss the possible causes for it. What measures can be taken by governments and individuals to overcome this problem?
The needs of fresh water is increasing and becoming a worldwide concern. This issue most likely causes by inadequate rain for the impact of global warming, and the most practical solution is converting sea water into fresh water.
Greenhouse gases in the atmosphere caused the alteration in climate cycle, and rain becoming more unpredictable and extremely rare. If the rainfall along the year is not as much as required, it most likely the fresh water will be insufficient because the water in the aquifer which is the main resource in most part of the world will be deeper and unreachable. One of the countries which severe badly is Sudan. Based on CNN report in 2017, most Sudanese use water from well for daily need, and inadequate rain in last decade has led to a massive water availability problem because water level storage below the soil cannot be reached anymore.
The most possible solution for this severity is sea water utilization as a main resource of fresh water by a particular treatment called desalination. Sea water is an unlimited substance on earth, and it is almost certain that will be sufficient fountain if an enormous project of desalination working properly across the globe. A successful desalination project can be seen in the west coast Borneo island, Indonesia. A medium desalination project established in 2001 as solver of lack fresh water on hand. The project provide 200 M3 freshwater a day for 200 families. If this kind of project developed properly with larger capacity in more place, it is possible the suffering of water unavailability can be prevented.
In conclusion, an incline of freshwater demand approaching as one of global issue. The majority problem of fresh water necessity is global warming which reduced rainfall along the year, and the solution is establishing more desalination station as the main provider of fresh water.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07419354839 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84903729838 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512903225806 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7919628687 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.357142857 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291205988158 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0999495423724 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609283110665 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187078088556 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302996036722 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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