Education is an essential part of a country and economy. It is irrefutable that, it has been mounting day by day. Even, it is a good sign for developing country instead youth. I will explain my pons and cons regarding this topic.
At begin with, there are many advantages for
promoting education between among the students are the best way out for developing country sectors. While, it help for youth for selection of subject. Even, it is more convenient for strong decision making. Now, students have optioned to choose their career according to their choice. For example, in couple of year ago, Mass communication subject had no concept. Even, most of the students are avoid it just because of parents restrictions because they did not like media field. Now, the people concept is totally change. Furthermore, native universities had changed the people point of view, regarding education. They conduct different kind of academic seminar and personality growth presentation through career counsel.
On the other hand, it has also some disadvantages.Fees structures are mounting rapidly. Even, nowadays, education institute is become more expensive commodity. Even; medium and low levels people have difficult to afford it. Students are mostly focusing about an international level course. The local education market value has decreased in very minor way.
However, I realized that, advantages are outweighed than disadvantages.
I put in it nutshell, I pen down saying that, government should take the responsibility for important education system and implement the basic norms and provide the better facilities to students.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 112, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...r developing country sectors. While, it help for youth for selection of subject. Eve...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'avoided'.
Suggestion: avoided
...concept. Even, most of the students are avoid it just because of parents restrictions...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'changed'.
Suggestion: changed
...eld. Now, the people concept is totally change. Furthermore, native universities had c...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Fees
...er hand, it has also some disadvantages.Fees structures are mounting rapidly. Even, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, while, for example, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45669291339 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94315499495 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669291338583 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9368891252 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.3 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7 20.7667163134 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.65 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120473507089 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0344047295335 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316439053196 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0504961574243 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386967795654 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.5 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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