You bought a TV a week ago but when you got home you discovered it did not work properly. You called customer service to report the problem but you have not yet received any help.Write a letter to the company and in your letterintroduce yourselfexplain th

dear Mr. John,

I am writing this letter with extremely aggressiveness. I have a problem with your company. I have complaint many time but unfortunately there are no response from your company side. How irresponsible you are? It was my big mistake i bought a Samsung TV through your company.

Here, I would like to mention that in couple of week ago, on dated 25-Jan-2019, I bought a Samsung TV from your company but when i reached home it was not working. I had diagnosed that there were certain issue on that screen. It was continuously opened and then closed. I think that the picture tube of TV has collapsed.

Furthermore, the back switch is instead not working. Even it is not connecting with system. I have tried many time but still the problem has fixed. I have complaint many time on your service help desk but there are no response.

Requested to you, Kindly change this defected item as soon as possible. I shall thankful to you.

You can contact me on my number 00123456789.

Waiting for your urgent response.

Yours Client,

Sarah

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Dear
dear Mr. John, I am writing this letter w...
^^^^
Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ss. I have a problem with your company. I have complaint many time but unfortunat...
^
Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
...lem with your company. I have complaint many time but unfortunately there are no response...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 233, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ponsible you are? It was my big mistake i bought a Samsung TV through your compan...
^
Line 5, column 130, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...a Samsung TV from your company but when i reached home it was not working. I had ...
^
Line 7, column 106, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
...ot connecting with system. I have tried many time but still the problem has fixed. I have...
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, so, still, then, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8152173913 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72555296067 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0414469241 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 49.2222222222 76.5299724578 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.2222222222 16.8248392259 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.49484536082 535% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290322122806 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818437591592 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771235880659 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134351311534 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678798681558 0.0580467560999 117% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.25 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.2 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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