There is an increase trend around the world to have a smaller family rather than a large family.
what are some advantages and disadvantages of having a small family rather than a large family?
In this new day and age, couples are opting to have more a nuclear family structure rather than a bigger family. This pattern can be seen across the spectrum and is only growing. There are some pros and cons with this smaller family structure, which I would like to discuss in this essay.
One such prominent benefit of having a smaller number of family members is that the parents can give appropriate amount of attention to each of their offspring. With a maximum of two kids, the parents can have better focus on their education and behaviour. This is a very important benefit in this new fast paced lifestyle. Another advantage of having a nuclear family structure is that you can save on the overall cost of living. With lesser number of members, they can live in a smaller house and save on lifestyle expenses. The increase in the number of children will be directly proportionate to their expenses.
Where there are many pros in this idea, there are also few cons as well. The first one is in regards to the help received in raising the children. In a larger setup, the elder can assist their parents in taking care of the house as well as in raising the younger sibling. This is highly beneficial when both the parents are working. Another disadvantage is to do with the emotional growth of the children. Studies show that kids with siblings are more respectable and empathetic.
In conclusion, although having a bigger family can be emotionally very fulfilling, it will really create a dent in the pocket. A couple should
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 53, Rule ID: MORE_A_JJ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'a more nuclear'?
Suggestion: a more nuclear
...day and age, couples are opting to have more a nuclear family structure rather than a bigger f...
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Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...also few cons as well. The first one is in regards to the help received in raising the childr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, really, so, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70260223048 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52901789437 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520446096654 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0273455824 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4117647059 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8235294118 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52941176471 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203143435835 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059272846172 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805998820192 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129573771914 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765417341093 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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