These days with advances in technology more and more people are working from home. Discuss advantages and disadvantages of this and give your own opinion.
todays world offers a large types of jobs which was not availeble few years back. Moreover, one of convenient ways to work is from home. In my opinion it is best way to save money from fuel cost and persons have more free time.
On the other hand, one of disadvantages of working in home is that person can not ask help or guidance from co-worker. Sometimes we have tasks what will include other peoples opinion. therefore, the best way to tackle the problem is by talking to that person eye to eye. For example, today I had to print cover picture to office notebook therefore I had to ask about the content from manager. By meeting people in real life answer was fast and straightforward.
Nevertheless, people who have privileges to work from home have more freedom how they scheduale time and they win some extra by skipping traffic jams. people who are working from home often called by the name own bosses. stress levels will drop and people are often more productive in home envaiorment. For example, from last year my mom moved from office to small studio which is next to the bedroom. we all can see that she have less stress and she got money bonus for the good work since she moved to studio.
To conclude, working from home can reduce stress levels and by person have more open work scheme they can be more productive. Furthermore, huge amount of time will be available by not waisting it in traffic jams. Instead we can spend it with our family
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1198.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53787878788 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35486669545 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564393939394 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2087641523 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.875 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263507967994 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891945866937 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734070830303 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162462976387 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344762428684 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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