Sometimes it is just curiosity, sometimes it is greed, sometimes it is the desire of having a better life and in some cases it is desperation which make people emigrate in search of brighter future not only for themselves but in most cases for their families too. In addtion to the common problems every foreinger has to foce up to in a new country, many believe that the impact of this decision on children should be taken into account too,
There is no doubt that the living a more prosperous country brings several benefits, among them better work condition, higher wages, an efficient healthcare system, social justice and safety. While many people living in developed countries take these aspects for granted. other less well-off, oppressed by tiranny or by poverty have to struggle to conquest basic human rights. Nowadays individuals from underdevelped countries or facing a difficult economic and political situation, consider happiness, wealthy and social stability as something they have a right to and therefore something to be actively pursued. In manx cases, the trigger that spurs persons to emigrate is a burning desire to guarantee a future to their children.
All of these rather bright considerations about migration, however should not blind us to the fact that moving to a foreign land can have negative consequences on children. The most critical aspect is represented by the age of the children. It is easier to move abroad when children are very young, because they do not have yet developed strong friednships and their roots are not still deeply stable in the soil of the mothercountry. Under these conditions, it will be simpler for them to get used to the new land, to learn the language and to adopt the way of living.
On the other hand, children on the edge of their adolesence could be more problematic to handle, since they have to leave friends, their hometwon, their hobbies and adapt to a country which in some cases they do not feel as theirs. In this case, kindness and a strong support by the family are the key to cope with a complicated situation. In the majority of the cases, once the first months have passed by, tensions are eased and the new life in the country can take off without further obstacles.
To sum up, moving to a foreing country is a challenging experience, especially when it involves children which have to conform to an unknown standard of life, a new language and have to make new friends in an alien contest.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Other
...untries take these aspects for granted. other less well-off, oppressed by tiranny or ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, while, as to, no doubt, in most cases, in some cases, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2058.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 424.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85377358491 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68045747226 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542452830189 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 648.0 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.979494759 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.0 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2857142857 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231754731736 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724039622171 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474330554427 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11667193042 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395356945763 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Other
...untries take these aspects for granted. other less well-off, oppressed by tiranny or ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, while, as to, no doubt, in most cases, in some cases, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2058.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 424.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85377358491 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68045747226 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542452830189 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 648.0 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.979494759 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.0 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2857142857 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231754731736 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724039622171 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474330554427 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11667193042 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395356945763 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.