tobacco is an addictive substance, but people have been using freely. some people say tobacco products( such as cigarettes and smoking) should be made illegal. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
The issue of addiction to drugs like tobacco has grown in importance over the world. Some people are of the view that cigarette and smoking pipe should be banned. I completely agree with this opinion and provide evidence as to why this regulation should be enforced in this essay.
There is no doubt that most of the delinquencies have stemmed from the use of drugs like tobacco. Those who make their habit base on these products, their needs to taking drugs will go on the rise as time goes on. When it comes their money run out of, they have no chance to commit crime ranging from theft to murder to support their needs. Additionally, smoking cigarettes and pipe in public have detrimental effects on social memes. For example, most of the teenagers form their behaviors through social norms. If smoking became a normal routine, it is more likely that the society's values would be replaced with worthlessness.
Furthermore, drug addiction causes human well-being exposure to dangers. Research has shown that Nicotine in the tobacco will increase the risk of lung diseases like bronchitis. Besides that, the passive smoker would infect more serious problems rather than smoker due to the air pollution created by it.
Although it may correct to say that tobacco and its product are an effective way to relief pains, it should not be available for all members of society. So that, authorities should make an exception to some cases.
Overall, it could be said that the availability of addictive substances like tobacco can cause a number of problems for individuals and societies. I do agree to prohibit smoking pipe and cigarette to prevent crimes and health problems.
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- individuals should not be allowed to carry guns. to what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
- the majority of children are raised by their grandparents due to the fact that their parents are busy working. is this positive or negative development? why? 61
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hould make an exception to some cases. Overall, it could be said that the avail...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, may, so, well, as to, for example, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03558718861 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59109926826 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626334519573 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8623157316 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.4375 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3125 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271859554636 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853985118454 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701260413491 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148969274988 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622334789631 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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