In today education, teachers roles are already replaced by modern gadgets such as tablet and smartphone. Do we still need teacher in school? What is your opinion?
nowadays,education is one of the most important things among people. In addtion, tecnology have become one tool to get knowladge. Some people say that teachers are already replaced by modern gadgets such as tablet and smartphone. However, in my opinion it is totally agreed that students still need teacher in school besause of two convicing reasons good role models and better explaination
first of all, teachers should be in the school besacuse they can be good the models. Also they can promote the good characters among students while they teach the lessons. Hence, there are a lot of good things students can learn from teacher such as soft skills. For example, students come to class for studiying, and teachers present the lesson professionally. Moreover, students can adopt many ways from them. In short, teachers would give students any good things.
Secondly,teacher is the best mentor among students because they explain the lesson nicely. Thus, when stundents do not understand they would explain more specifically. For example, if students do not understand about the lessons teachers could give more examples. Students cannot get explaination on their gadgets. In brief, teachers can give students more specific explainations about the lessons.
To conclude, due to two reasons which are good role models and better explaination, i truly agree with the statement that says students need teachers in school. the students should obey teachers because it is a responbility for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, thus, while, for example, in brief, in short, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39662447257 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8368617106 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565400843882 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.0867949 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9375 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8125 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234423063944 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824472531877 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105832025244 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166771119125 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100237903327 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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