Modern era of latest technology plays a vital role in everyone's life. nowadays children play computer games more compare to outdoor sports and i will further elucidate more on this statement.
Children are living in the era of modernization where they more focus on computer games rather to play any outdoor games. Kids are using mobiles and computer more. It is a negative effect on the mind of pupils. Anything beyond the limit is poisonous. Excessive use of computer games will leads to slow development of the child as well as the child will become lazy.
Latest technology like smart phones, computers, laptops gains attention towards it and keep the children busy, so the children will ignore rest of the things. Playing games up to late nights or while eating foods and more one to major things is while we are sitting with their parents and grand parents children were busy with their computer games and ignore the talks with them.
However, parents do not allow children to go out of the house due to much heat. Children are playing smart phones to become smart and listening the rhymes, children can sharp their minds by playing puzzles games and so on.
To conclude my statement children have to focus more on outdoor games compared to computer games which leads to more active and gets fit to pleasure for the children.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
Modern era of latest technology plays a vital role in everyo...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nowadays
...y plays a vital role in everyones life. nowadays children play computer games more compa...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ames more compare to outdoor sports and i will further elucidate more on this sta...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...s. Excessive use of computer games will leads to slow development of the child as wel...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Latest'.
Suggestion: The Latest
... well as the child will become lazy. Latest technology like smart phones, computers...
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Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...low children to go out of the house due to much heat. Children are playing smart p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1116.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85217391304 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30900268162 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2837196793 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225113071544 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862143815003 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554936525996 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141114120849 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206347863816 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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