Today, many people do not realize how important the nature is.
Why is this?
How can people learn more about the important of the natural world?
Nature is the source of our all needs, so we should have the knowledge of our source of livelihood. Most of the people do not care about nature, although our survival solely depends on nature. I will discuss the reasons of this ignorance and how people can learn more about our world in my further paragraphs.
To embark on, though all our needs such as food, shelter and cloths are the gift of Mother Nature, people still ignore this facts. There are numerous reasons behind this lack of awareness. Firstly, today’s generation receive all their needs in supermarkets and malls. They believe that all their required items are abundant in the society. Secondly, government are not giving much importance in spreading knowledge source of foods, cloths and all our day-to-day used materials. Lastly, older people afraid of sharing this knowledge with young ones as they are technologically more advance than older generation. Older people feel themselves outdated even though they have the most valuable knowledge gathered though experiences.
In many ways, awareness and importance of nature can be spread to people. Firstly, government should include a subject in schools which is all about nature and its importance. We should nurture this awareness from childhood so that in future they respect nature and its gift. Secondly, society must create a platform to exchange ideas among older and young generation so that experiences earn by aged people become a boon for next generation. Otherwise, community, as a whole, will not able to raise their level.
To recapitulate, government and society must work hand in hand to share importance of nature from generation to generation through teaching our children and explaining the difficulties faced by older generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, still, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27816901408 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75151893995 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549295774648 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5842726218 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6875 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279543194803 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848764304442 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805688928272 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161601616679 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671993330579 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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