Today more and more tourist are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as sahar desert or the antartica.
What are the benefits and disadvantage for tourist who visit such places?
A huge amount of people today prefer to frequent areas which have extreme climatic weather. This trend is gaining increased popularity among the people all around the world. In this essay, I would discuss both merits and demerits associated to travelling places which are in their extremity on climatic scale.
Firstly, the major demerit associated with visiting regions with highest temperature is that the survival chances are low. This means, people might fall sick or may face any injuries while exploring the areas due to lack of required amount of air, water and food. Sometimes, few injuries can be fatal as there are not enough resources to offer proper treatment. Secondly, it is observed that the animal habitat in such locations are quite dangerous as compared to animals residing in normal climatic regions. These animals are more harmful to human beings and can even lead to loss of life.
Now moving toward the other side, people visit places with extreme climate to overcome their urge of push their adrenaline level to the fullest. Tourist considers such areas as the adventure of life. Some believe that living in extreme conditions is beneficial to the humans as, it aid them to survive in situations like drought or any other natural calamities. As, during such period the resources required to survive are in scarcity, it would help the person to live without it for more time as compared to others people.
To recapitulate, like a coin has two sides; frequenting to extremity climatic zones has both advantages as well as demerits. It's the individual's choice to visit such place and experience the life long adventure or to stay as far possible safe in their own comfortable zones of environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06993006993 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56182060992 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608391608392 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9882933027 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.571428571 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17240477383 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544764278799 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532659913854 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973313886313 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516833840748 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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