Over the last few decades tourism has a quiet diverse dimension across the world. It is true that ,visit to some hostile places such as Sahara and Antarctica has both its own benefits and drawbacks which will be discussed in this essay.
On the one hand, individuals get an opportunity to explore the mesmerizing beauty of such places. To elaborate, extreme temperature and adventurous activities will not only allure the tourist during their visit, but also give them an immense knowledge about the destination. Sahara desert, for instance ,is the largest and hottest desert in the world visiting to such place will provide information about the climatic conditions and geographical location. Thus, it would be beneficial to organise a trip to such distinct places since it will provide an invaluable experience.
On the other hand ,exploring to such adventurous places may not be very much successful always. To elucidate, weather conditions at Antarctica and Sahara desert are most of the time extreme which can lead to some health issues, such as asthma and other skin related diseases. For example, record says, Sahara desert is the most humid place where the number of visitors seeking medical emergency are agumenting each day. Hence, visiting to such locations are quite challenging and perilous.
To conclude, tourism is certainly gaining popularity worldwide especially to soome remote places in particular Sahara desert and Antarctica as such destination provide wide knowledge about the places ,whilst it can affect the individual physically.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, may, so, thus, for example, for instance, in particular, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38367346939 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77198455545 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616326530612 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7091356604 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.909090909 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2727272727 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351249520582 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127273354253 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692953131943 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203585985307 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046524484217 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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