Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic?What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

The number of travelers that visit the exotic places like the Sahara Desert or the Antarctic has increased drastically during the recent times. Although there are disadvantages visiting such places however there are few benefits to it as detailed in this essay.

On one hand, there are risks involved in travelling to such places. The reason for these risks is that these regions are inhabitable for humans. For example, the scarcity of water in the Sahara or the abundance of ice in the Antarctic pose a threat. A survey found that around 25 percent of people return half-way through the journey to the Sahara due to extreme conditions in the desert. Consequently, tourists' health is at stake if they are not well-equipped. Additionally, these places are dumped with waste which pose a greater threat to the biodiversity.

On the other hand, there are two main benefits of visiting destinations that are challenging to reach. Firstly, the adventure enthusiasts are ready to roll the dice and set on expeditions. This is because they are aware of the harsh conditions and are willing to provoke themselves to boost their confidence. For example, the breath-taking views of the sand dunes and the gorgeous Aurora Borealis of Antarctica trigger the tourist's eagerness to experience these. Additionally, people who appreciate nature are amazed by the wonders of nature and would want to be there to be part of it.

To summarize, there are both advantages and drawbacks of visiting places that are not suitable for human stay. Given the situation, if people are extra cautious about their safety and eco-friendly, they would be able experience and conquer the unknown.

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS General Training

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 94, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'reaching'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: reaching
...iting destinations that are challenging to reach. Firstly, the adventure enthusiasts are...
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Line 5, column 424, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'tourists'' or 'tourist's'?
Suggestion: tourists'; tourist's
...rora Borealis of Antarctica trigger the tourists eagerness to experience these. Addition...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, however, if, so, thus, well, for example, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10948905109 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85591812116 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554744525547 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.2353451156 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.3333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304123979483 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085404078287 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738053015699 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175684942283 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0954379586148 0.056905535591 168% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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