In the recent past, it has been observed that travelling to the adverse places has gained popularity. People started exploring the unimaginable places for instance, extremely hot places like Sahara desert as well as exceptionally chilled places like Antarctic. In this essay, we will discuss both, pros and cons of travelling to such inhabitant spots.
First and foremost, this is irrefutable fact that such challenges can only be driven by extreme passion so as to achieve something desirable.One of the prime benefit of getting to such place is that the difficult journey boost the confidence owing to the magical experiences they have on their path. Moreover, when globetrotters reach these paramount destinations their heart, mind and soul gets filled with amazing sense of achievement. Seeing something so serene and incredible in real fills the heart with joy, peace and tranquility.Needless to say, Its like dream come true to witness something which is merely possible in pictures or internet.
However, it is also evident that heading off to such rare places is not everyone's cup of tea due to the hurdles associated with such trips. It goes without saying that not only one has to come out of the comfort zone but there should be willingness to get disconnected with all the luxury so as to observe these unthinkable yet amazingly distinct territories. Furthermore, the biggest challenge is the scarcity of resources i.e. water, food, medicine etc in such places.There are already paucity of basic needs for the habitats let alone serving the tourists.
Besides, It is fairly possible to get an injury also, one can also lose stamina and energy while travelling the erratic roads which needs urgent attention of a doctor or medical professional.The number of fatality has been recorded due to absence of timely medical health in such secular places. Along with, it has also been observed that while doing rafting, trekking or such adventurous activities, many people faced the serious injuries which had serious consequences in their lives. In fact few people became unmovable for their entire life.
To conclude with, in the light of above mentioned aspects, I believe that travelling to such remote and troublesome places might appeals to group of adventurous & passionate travelers which eventually expand their horizon whereas such adventure always comes with plenty of challenges and hurdles.Even a minute miss can have a tremendous effect on someone's whole life. Thus, it is imperative to have thoughtful care and security measures as well as only those who are capable of taking this burdensome journey should go ahead.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, whereas, while, as to, for instance, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2228.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 424.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25471698113 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87495906395 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 176.041082164 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606132075472 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 703.8 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.7960656132 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.142857143 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2857142857 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172085611795 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602514768437 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557136511868 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101133061697 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471033761392 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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