Traveling has always been a getaway for people. People of different age often travel to foreign places mainly for work, family vacation or studies. Research has even shown that traveling helps people being efficient, also it has helped people in changing their perspective towards life in various ways. Earlier people would love to travel to various tourist places like Paris, Rome, Venice, Thailand etc. However, now-a-days people love traveling to isolated places where the conditions aren't very favourable for humans. It has been observed that more tourists are visiting places where the weather is scorching hot and freezing cold. Of late, Sahara Desert and the Antarctic are the places which attracts tourist who love to have an adventurous experience. In this essay, we shall discuss the pros and cons for the same.
Let's talk about the benefits of traveling to scorching or freezing areas. Moreover, tourist love to travel to these places as it untouched and the nature hasn't been wrecked by human. Secondly, the tourist would choose to visit such places to overcome their fears. Through which they would not only conquer their fears, but also boost their confidence. All these factors, helps tourists in developing a different perspective towards life. On completing their tour in such a harsh environment, fills their heart with joy, peace and tranquillity.
On the other side of the argument, it is very evident that exploring places like Sahara Desert or the Antarctic, isn't everyone's cup of tea. Tourist who wish to travel to such places should be prepared physically as well as mentally. A lot of passion is needed to travel to places where the conditions aren't favourable for humans, not forgetting the fact where the resources to consume are scarce. Tourist not only have to come out of their comfort zone but also have to give away their luxuries throughout the trip. Not forgetting the fact, where the extreme conditions would lead to some serious fatalities. Since these places aren't very equipped with the medical facilities, it is most likely tourist might even lose their life. It has been observed the number of fatalities has been recorded due to absence of timely medical health. A minute missed in an activity can lead serious ramifications in the future.
To conclude, traveling to such a secular place might attract adventurous or passionate travellers which will not only give them treasured memories but also will expand their horizon. Thus, it is crucial to consider all the care and security measures, also be prepared for burdensome journey.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2164.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 421.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14014251781 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53441397826 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517814726841 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 670.5 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5836455479 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5416666667 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323244907129 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935473481057 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873201420036 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188272492042 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714890433839 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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