Nowadays, tourists are attracted towards places with challenging environmental conditions. Though these places provide tourists with life time experiences and adventure but also exposes drastic challenges which one might not be prepared or expected of. I feel that one might face challenges with adjusting to these places however, the experience gained will be memorable for lifetime.
Presently, people tries to visit places which are more exciting and supplies Adrenalin rush to experience. Places such as Sahara Desert, Antarctic observes very unpredictable weather conditions, absence of basic supplies which is difficult for travellers. However, an adventurous tourist always enjoys such unpredictable conditions and the journey of survival through such obstacles. For example, a large number of start ups are opening recently for such travel enthusiasts who forms an open forum in order to support such tourism. Therefore, I believe that a nature lover will always gather in numerous advantages and experiences by visiting such challenging places which will be cherished across life time.
The main disadvantage of visiting such places is the amount of risk a person has to take and go through it. These places offer extreme natural conditions which is not ideal for common visitors to get accustomed with. For example, visitors having less physical fitness suffers from tremendous health issues such as breathlessness, chest pain, losing senses. Though these places help one with gaining thrill but one has to compete with deadly climatic conditions to survive.
Nature lovers are more dragged toward locations with challenges and excitements which includes the Sahara Desert or the Antarctic. These locations give a lifetime experience to cherish but one also exposes to cope with severe natural conditions that might effect one’s survival. To conclude, I believe strongly that people must visit such places to witness the challenges nature poses towards us while experiencing the beauty and adventure one has to imbibe within.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: lifetime
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Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
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Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'challenges'' or 'challenge's'?
Suggestion: challenges'; challenge's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for example, i feel, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61935483871 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79041767505 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574193548387 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.4067331481 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 116.133333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352421315471 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126273047788 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601997459512 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213633510715 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102413841981 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.