Today more people are traveling than ever before. Why is this the case?
What are the benefits of traveling for the travelers?
The traveling fills the soul of travelers and provides an opportunity to discover more about the world. With the advent of high speeding aero-planes and other fast-paced machines made it possible for the people to cover the days’ distance in hours. As a result, more and more people are frequently traveling towards their favorite destinations nowadays and fulfilling their dreams. The motives behind traveling could be a business activity or a leisure pursuit but most of the travelers are traveling for relaxation.
While traveling could be a costly pursuit, but it encompasses innumerable advantages. For example, traveling bridges the gap between the people and connect them so that they can witness how similar or different are the traditions of each community. It also broadens the horizon of travelers and promotes understanding of other cultures, resultantly, the traveler gets a chance to see real-life issues from a different angle and narrows the sense of prejudice etc.
The traveling can teach oneself unforgettable lessons of life. To illustrate this, mostly, in the journey, the things don’t go as planned and such situations help oneself to cope with different circumstances. Additionally, it is a proven technique to move out of your comfort zone for getting useful ideas because minds react creatively in the peaceful environment. That is why the senior staff of large corporations goes on the retreats so that they can get isolation from their routine to think.
If you travel with your friends and family members, it will help you to create a strong bond among yourselves by creating lifelong memories. On the other hand, traveling can be an effective way to deal stress and can contribute towards the improvement of tolerance level because of interaction with nature.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, for example, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30662020906 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9566672196 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606271777003 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7692307692 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.153846154 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354852228594 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128963264115 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906926484441 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207130626856 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113773365499 0.056905535591 200% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.