Undoubtedly, with the advent of internet networking and with the advancement of transportation, the life of employees have simplified and has become more convenient. In this modern era, individuals can do tasks and live anywhere according to their choice , because these days there are various modes of transport. In this essay, I will justify both adbantages and disadvantage regarding this before reaching to my opinion.
To begin with, there are a lot of benefits of advancing technology and transportation. The first and foremost is that internet networking system becomes a basic necessity to lead a better life. A person can easily do their work at any place with the internet connectivity. Another one is that a person can go anywhere they want, because there are various automobiles invented which makes distance shorter as well as these are more comfortable and convenient. For instance , these days a person can do their job from home by online system.
On the other hand, it has certain drawbacks . The first one is that if people start their work from home, they become so lazy and they will also suffer from many diseases like obesity. Furthermore, they will take sendantory lifestyles and do not do any exercise. It also affects ok their physical and mental power .
For example, they totally rely on technology, as sometimes technology will be hault, then the totally online work will stopped.
To summarise, I strongly believe that with the modernization technology, various improvements are in the lifestyle. Therefore, it's advantages are outweigh its disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, regarding, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24409448819 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00905030715 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594488188976 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7149440214 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9333333333 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274707433843 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749662238661 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626979298563 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127824383215 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519620869068 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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