Due to the advanced in communicating patern and also change in transportation method people have a option to choose a place for working and living. there are several pros of this change then cons.
Firstly, an individual can decide a good place where they can can go and work as per their convinence. Moreover commuting from one place to another have also become easy due to growing number of vehicles and also because of improved in public transport. For instance: if an individual is living in country side and get a better job in city he can easily accept it and can go daily.
Secondly , getting a better life and good pay also take a person to different place or a country away from home . moreover this opportunity of living a pose life is possible as we have lots of communicating gadgets available . For ex. if a persons lives in canada away from home town can easily communicate with their family member through video call, skype and gives a feeling of having a talk face to face.
howeever , their are also some demerits of living away and working . sometimes a person are very much attached to near and dear ones that he get a home sickness and need to live job or a place where he is living . beside this , living expenses also make it difficult to cope with such a siatution.
To encapsulate, even though advanced in technologic developnment has gien better option for an individual to live a suitable life and work on our pace their are certian critiria which stops a persn to follow it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61567164179 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59368846138 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555970149254 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3587985632 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.083333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190782470746 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688222889529 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383125696239 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106208090037 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314984134045 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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