Indeed, there are plenty online institutions exist who offers range of courses and study materials to get degree in convenient way and even they get positive response from some people, though others still like to traditional way of education.
To the revolution of "internet" this(online study) kind of Idea become practical, in which people have full access to do study in their preferable schedule. Because the lesson is recorded by experts or tutors and is presented on the specific site or channel, which is allowed the only authorised students who pay for the such course, space for the classrooms are not needed. Moreover, due to lesson is recorded, students could play often time if it is not clear and even more the lesson is not understandable then student can contact with the teacher regarding the topic via emails or phone. In addition, anyone can enroll in this courses, including working person and they offer it in very affordable price. Through this, many people can take advantage and can be reached to vast majority of people. In the other hand, the classroom just allowed the limited numbers of students.
Conversely of this, people have values of traditional method of education because it creates that atmosphere of education which leads vital for students to engage in studies for long time and physical lesson, in which teachers explain topic to students, have its own emphasise on students. Through this practice of study, students might have been influenced the method of teaching and they can ask questions meanwhile in lecture, related the topic, to teacher. To ask questions to mentor is considered as a phenomenon way to grasp knowledge. If confusion might have not been cleared properly, they (tutors) give efficient examples on the basis of topic. For example, a research printed on the newspaper that among the students who have tend to ask questions are better academic results.
In conclusion, I opine that both types of education have their advantages, however, the traditional education system provides the actual learning experience that could not get from any other methods.
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- ‘In today’s world, some prefer online courses whereas others prefer classroom teaching’Discuss both views and give your opinion. 84
- Some believe it is the responsibility of government to take care of the environment, others think people are responsible for it. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 67
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 436, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put before the verb 'play'.
Suggestion: often play
...e to lesson is recorded, students could play often time if it is not clear and even more t...
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Line 3, column 635, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...hone. In addition, anyone can enroll in this courses, including working person and t...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Conversely,
...wed the limited numbers of students. Conversely of this, people have values of traditio...
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Line 5, column 599, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'tutor'
Suggestion: tutor
...ht have not been cleared properly, they tutors give efficient examples on the basis of...
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Line 5, column 735, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
...spaper that among the students who have tend to ask questions are better academic re...
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Line 7, column 147, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to experience'
Suggestion: to experience
...ion system provides the actual learning experience that could not get from any other metho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, then, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18550724638 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75779089636 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576811594203 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.7790966358 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.615384615 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5384615385 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.097427349704 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0332350826914 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499763664148 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.056491410703 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323951185724 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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