Tourism is causing environmental problems all over the world.
What are the main causes of this. What are some solutions.
Three types of paragraphs -
1) Introductory
2) Main body
3) Summary/ Conclusion
Elements of introductory paragraph -
a) Introductory/ general sentence
b) Paraphrased version of the topic
c) Overview
Tourism is causing environmental problems all over the world.
1h 55m 37s
6:58 PM
Essay by Mrunal
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Tourism is the main reason behind global warming. Today we have tremendous development in
Tourism is the main reason behind global warming on the Earth. In today's world, we have tremendous development in technology. In earlier centuries it was difficult to travel but now ravelling is very easier . Though it hard to earn money ,choices of individuals have changed, mostly families decide to have atleast one vacation in a year to beaches, hillstations or historical places.
On the one hand it is good for growing economy. It helps to create employment. people can live stress less life. commercial hotels are increasing .standard of living has improved.
on the other side, it causes to increase pollution,like sound, air, water environment pollution. Forests have loose their peace as number of human being visit there.people have partys and celebration which creates noise which imbalances forests, one should take responsibility ,it is our duty to do not harm to the nature. while living a place they should consider every item has been disposed properly.
In the summer, beaches are full with crowd, now a days cruise business is high on demand, people like to enjoy their holidays on ship. but the same time their is not proper management of wastage of cruise, garbage is directly disposed in sea water, which make occean water pollut and affects marine life.
To avoid this there must be rules to avoid pollution like , at historical places if somebody is throwing trash then he or she must have to pay fine.
more than that evevry citizen should this our responsibility to keep our eath clean. government must take actions to avoid this. proper wastage bins must be kept at every social place. restrooms must be available at tourist spots.
to sum up this wide topic, tourism is best base of growing economy still, it must correct direction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, then, while, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00340136054 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62749889753 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673469387755 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.1098271473 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4210526316 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4736842105 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.21052631579 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0464137096293 0.244688304435 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0152179441167 0.084324248473 18% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0251862774635 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0214830444747 0.151304729494 14% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173548973098 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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