It is true that traffic overload is a serious issue in large cities nowadays. In order to decrease number of vehicle on the streets different actions can be applied.
The key solution for reducing traffic jams on a city could probably be the improved public transportation system. As if a city had comfortable vehicles with a good schedule and reasonable fee, it would encourage citizens to use public transport on daily basis rather than drive a private one. For instance, in my home city with appearance of the underground system large amount of people change their preferences in the favor of the public transport.
In addition, city authorities may imply charges for entering to the city by cars or trucks and even close some streets for private transport. Hopefully, entrance fee will act as a deterrent factor for non-residential transport and help raise money for improvements in city’s transportation system. To illustrate, London city has a congestion charge for those vehicles, which are willing to enter the cities center. Another way to tackle a traffic problem is construction of multilevel junctions and extension of existing roads in order to increase their carrying capacity. As a result, all measures listed above in combination should lead to the solution of a raising problem of the roadblock in rush hours.
In conclusion, a growing issue of a heavy traffic in the cities can be successfully tackled if various measures will be introduced such as improvement in the public transportation system, construction of new junctions and implementation of a congestion fee.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 35, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'heavy traffic'.
Suggestion: heavy traffic
.... In conclusion, a growing issue of a heavy traffic in the cities can be successfully tackl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23346303502 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12997714899 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587548638132 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.813503738 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.272727273 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169528871899 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725558273766 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504355541852 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106749123439 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274551339775 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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