Letter to your manager for the suggestion to open a cafeteria for staff in the company
Dear Mr. Smirnov,
I am writing with regard to our latest meeting where you have told us to suggest what can be done to improve our company. Frankly speaking, my colleagues and I discussed our ideas after the meeting and came up with the idea to open a canteen for the staff.
The matter of fact is that we do not have a kitchen in the office and tend to eat in the nearest restaurant. However, there are usually crowd and quite expensive and the most do not like the food they cook. that is why we decided to suggest you to open a cafeteria on the first floor.
Actually, one of our tenants is leaving at the end of the month and the office premises are suitable for alteration under the canteen. As everyone wants to attend company’s cafeteria I am sure that it will pay off no more than in a year.
Thank you in advance for the attention to this matter.
Best regards,
Maria Sergeeva)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'crowds'?
Suggestion: crowds
... restaurant. However, there are usually crowd and quite expensive and the most do not...
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Line 5, column 208, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...he most do not like the food they cook. that is why we decided to suggest you to ope...
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Line 5, column 286, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to open a cafeteria on the first floor. Actually, one of our tenants is leaving ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, frankly, however, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 741.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41071428571 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38778038802 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64880952381 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2828395312 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3333333333 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 4.34317383033 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210068502886 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725210541295 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650199999212 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114666425832 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019508136653 0.0580467560999 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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