The trend of online shopping is increasing significantly. What effect is this having on the environment and society in general?
Latest invention of technology has changed the way of living for the people in the world. Though the internet has made our life more convenient and meaningful, it has significantly affected the social life in the society.
Nowadays, people have become more aware about the things around them than they used to be a few years back. The Internet and it by-product social media has immensely influenced the people. Not only has it given exposure to better their lifestyle, it has made one's life more convenient. Subsequently, people can now shop products by just clicking on the mobile screen without having to go out in search of it and waste time.
However, this modern way of shopping has made people unhealthy and discourage to stay fit. For instance, people move around less for shopping, and live a sedentary lifestyle. As a result there is less body movement and less cardiovascular activity making them lose their fitness and be exposed to illness.
Furthermore, it has affected the environment as people do not go out shopping frequently and prefer to order goods online. This change impacted the local market negatively.
Moreover, people are more lodged in their handsets and participate less in society events. For example, people stay more connected to friends and family living far away than the person living next door.This has created a huge impact on the society
In conclusion, Although, this trend has definitely helped people to improve their lifestyle and made lives more convenient than ever but affected the soical enviroment and society in general.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Latest'.
Suggestion: The Latest
Latest invention of technology has changed the...
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Line 3, column 47, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding things'?
Suggestion: the surrounding things
...ys, people have become more aware about the things around them than they used to be a few years back. ...
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Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... to better their lifestyle, it has made ones life more convenient. Subsequently, peo...
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Line 9, column 203, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...r away than the person living next door.This has created a huge impact on the societ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in general, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1511627907 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67625203979 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577519379845 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.9219923161 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.230769231 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133368624517 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0429931307827 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394841888452 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0737854409619 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414007284193 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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