Trying to save endangered animal species from extinction is a waste of valuable resources.
Do you agree or disagree?
The issue of whether we should attempt to save endangered species from
extinction or not is certainly a contentious one. Despite the arguments of some
people that such animals serve no useful purpose and should be allowed to die
out just as many others ( including the dinosaurs ) have in the past, it is my
personal belief that thy should in fact be preserved. Tow of the principal reasons
for this are as follows.
Firstly, it is vital that we appreciate the importance of endangered species on
maintaining the balance of nature. Ecosystems are delicate arrangements where
plants and animals all depend on each other for survival. The disappearance or
introduction of any animal species disrupts the balance and negatively impacts
upon other plants and animals by breaking the food chain and altering the
habitat in which they live. Such imbalances frequently returns to haunt us in
unexpected ways. Just as rabbits that were introduced to Australia soon after
European settlement now compete with native species for food and destroy
farmer’s crops, the extinction of a predator can cause plagues by following its
prey to multiply unchecked. Therefore, since ecological change constitutes a
potential risk to us and our environment, it is clearly in our own interest to
protect endangered species.
Yet, perhaps the strongest argument in favour of preserving endangered species
is that all life has intrinsic value; even if endangered species are not useful to us
in any practical way they should be preserved nevertheless. Further, given that
humans are responsible for destroying the natural habitat of many endangered
animals, we should make every possible effort to save them.
In conclusion, i once again restate any view that saving endangered species is
worthwhile. Not only do they help to maintain balance of nature, but they also
have value in and if themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42904290429 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9072667018 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607260726073 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.6666463328 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.538461538 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 26.0 4.38176352705 593% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204487714833 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710200139564 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617550284686 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0504218496942 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554009472465 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.