Uniforms should be banned in school . children should be free to wear what they like. Do you agree or disagree?
Certain experts believe that students ought to be provided the liberty of wearing clothes of their choice by banning the school uniforms. If asked, I completely disagree with this notion. This essay will discuss few arguments for my opinion as well as the other side, followed by a reasoned conclusion.
To begin with, learners having freedom of dressing of their own will create social differences. Since, youngsters from rich family would be bifurcated in the school, the poor might face several injustice. For example, being aware of the social status, pupils of economically weaker section in school are restricted to participate in several sports. In addition, it may also affect the mental development of the students. As the confidence of the destitute students, unable to dress well in school, would be crumbled by looking to the children of the richer section.
Conversely, autonomy of dressing style of young generation in school would make them overjoyed. While the students allowed to wear fashionable clothes are relieved from the stress of wearing a particular uniform, they feel relaxed and ecstatic. For instance, few schools allowing free style clothes on last day of every month makes their students cheerful. However, such type of culture has lead to an unwanted situation of economic crisis for the poor families where the adolescents do ask forcefully their parents to purchase expensive clothes.
In conclusion, while people may vary in their thoughts, I strongly believe that no choice should be given against wearing the uniform at school level as it creates difference in their social status and resist the improvement in mental capacity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, however, if, look, may, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31203007519 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69859093095 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635338345865 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5737406839 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.692307692 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6923076923 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240730574347 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726694783591 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592671501291 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133911767545 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221504067186 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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