University offers an online- course for students. Do you think positive and negative for development?
It is commonly believed that there is an increase in the amount of online course for students in a university. I believed that online learning consists of advantages and disadvantages.
To begin with the advantages, there are many benefits to online learning. At first, the online lessons give the student with a variety of unlimited sources of knowledge and skills in a diversity of fields such as science or financial. You need only a hi-tech device, that may open the door to approach the wealth of human intelligence. For instance, many prestigious universities in the world such as Harvard, MIT,… offer a large number of online courses on YouTube or television channels.
In addition, convenience is an advantage, which can’t be ignored. With some comfortable places such as regular coffees, your bed,… you could be armed with a diversity of useful skills without going to school.
On the other hand, online learning, which is one direction, is the lack of interaction between students and professors. The students don’t get the answer to their professors when they were in trouble. In addition, the university has faced some difficulty when they estimate the qualitative study of their students.
It’s undeniable that online learning has brought about the number of benefits. In addition, it had also a lot of disadvantages. From my perspective, online learning depends on the ability of the student.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, for instance, in addition, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1215.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3056768559 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00504587634 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589519650655 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1527078957 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7857142857 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3571428571 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212244969634 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669507972718 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737771780263 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109368307722 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069115098529 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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