University students must pay all tuition fees, because it benefits mostly them individually, rather than the society as a whole.
Do you agree or disagree?
The tuition fees in many American Universities are very high. It is argued that the student should be solely responsible to pay them as they reap the resulting benefits more than the society. This essay agrees with the aforementioned hypothesis and presents a couple of arguments in favor of the same.
Once the university studies are completed, most of the students simply go the corporate way and bag a job of his or her dreams. A degree helps an individual earn a living and live a lifestyle of their choice. However, it has been observed that these individuals do little or nothing to give back to the community other than pay the taxes.
There are very few students who are exceptional and end up inventing a product which benefits the society as a whole. But such cases are few and infrequent. It would be unfair to ask the tax payers to pay for the education of selfish individuals. The tax-payers money can be utilized in a better way. For instance, it can be used for building better infrastructure, public health campaigns etc.
In conclusion, one should be responsible to pay for something if the benefits are limited to the individual. The collective money of the society cannot be and should not be used for the welfare of certain individuals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 395, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...astructure, public health campaigns etc. In conclusion, one should be responsible...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1056.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82191780822 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86656178302 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607305936073 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.803352862 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.2307692308 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8461538462 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76923076923 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190312087302 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597224258366 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552505540672 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109580476084 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490601734549 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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