The use of cell phones has grown rapidly in the past few years. People use them for both business and personal reason.
What are advantages and disadvantages of the wide spread use of cell phones. Give reasons with examples
Cell phone an invention which has changed the telecommunication system entirely in the world. Martin cooper invented telecommunication device through which all people of the world can talk to each other easily. As smartphones have better technology within them, they have made significant improvements in the communicating system Around the globe. The price of the handsets starts from few hundreds to lakh of rupees depending on the technology features of the cellphones while telecommunication technology has encouraged the society to this extend that they have forgotten that this machinery can cause harm also.both these arguments will be analysed and reach to conclusion.
There is no doubt that mobile phones have changed the life style of the Society. The availability of the cell phones have helped individuals to call their families around the globe. Addition to this it is said that 50% of the people use this device to access information immediately. It has also allowed the business to be more productive and secure.
Moreover, the technology development of the cellphones has helped our society to use data connection facilities as few years back we were dependent on wi fi facilities only. The reconstruction of this facility has made individuals very comfortable as they are able to use application anywhere they wish too. For example, the business man are able to do meeting through web camera only and people are able to transfer money to any bank anytime. This technology has provided better solution to the problems everywhere in the society.
On the other hand, cellphones has created unlimited distractions among the individuals. There are lakhs of individuals in society who have accidents just due to the distraction of the cell phones.Addition to this, sometimes people get upset if they leave their cellphones at home. According to them without cellphones their life is incomplete.Addition to this people are getting severe health problems such as skin cancer, hearing problem. These days it is said that if people talk on phone while charging , it can cause them skin cancer.
Besides all these issues, we have heard from the people. The use of cell phones have not decreased but they are still considered as the best resource of communication which controls our life fully. Therefore it depends on the us that how much importance we want to give to this technology in our life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
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Suggestion: Addition
...e to the distraction of the cell phones.Addition to this, sometimes people get upset if ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Addition
...out cellphones their life is incomplete.Addition to this people are getting severe healt...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t if people talk on phone while charging , it can cause them skin cancer. Besi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r. Besides all these issues, we have heard from the people. The use of cell p...
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Line 9, column 200, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...nication which controls our life fully. Therefore it depends on the us that how much impo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, for example, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2026.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19487179487 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04579850949 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520512820513 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 649.8 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9980515195 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.631578947 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5263157895 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.89473684211 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158548793333 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497781177474 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376150168642 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948164135371 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233119308415 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.