The use of social media, (example Facebook and Twitter), Is replacing face to face contact with many people.
Do the advantage outweigh the disadvantage?
The last 20 years have witnessed a tremendous growth in the field of information technology. It has revolutionised every aspect of human life such as communication, entertainment etcetera. The Internet has been the most understanding and innovation in the history of mankind and social media is the gift of Internet to people. According to the survey, it is noticed that social media is alerted the fact to face contact. Social media has some prons and cons which I will portray in the following segments.
To begin with, there is plethora of benefits of using social media. The predominant merit is , Nowadays many tech-savvy ministers are using social media such as Twitter to communicate with the local people, so that they address the problem effectively which are prevailing in the world such as female foeticide, dowry system and so on. For instance, Prime Minister of India, Mr Narendra Modi using the Twitter, with the help of which he can directly take the views of common people to eradicate the problems. Moreover, it can help people to know about the others who are living in the other continents of the world. It gives them the opportunity to interact with them and know about their culture and language besides this, it helps to improve the communication skills.
There is a maxin, every Quine has two sides so it also has another dark side, which contains some cons of social media. Primarily, People are now more emphasize on making more friends. Nowadays, people have a lot of virtual Friends but none is true friend who could stand with them in their thick and thins. Apart from this, people are spent a lot of time on glued two door social websites such as WhatsApp, hike, Snapchat, Facebook etcetera.people inclined towords them more and more day by day which declined the face to face contacts. Even they do not give time to their families, due to this, a lot of conflicts are occurring in the family is, which gave birth to the nuclear families.
To recapitulate, everyone has their own views, I do not deny any of them. But I cogitate that social media help people to come lick it is the end know about the things which are prevailing all over the world but excessive use of it can cause detrimental effects on the human life. Further more, I deemed that, there is a need to understand the problem and address it before it gets too late. If percent use it judiciously it become a boon for the human life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, so, apart from, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2011.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 425.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73176470588 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61214029239 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.9 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2223523929 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.842105263 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3684210526 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52631578947 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237254357505 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068840764756 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711658245771 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13614518096 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408364942558 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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