Water resources in many places are polluted. What consequences do result from it? How do people resolve this problem?
One of the biggest problems which people have to face is water pollution.
It harms the human's health intensely. Billions of people, mostly in poor countries, have to use polluted water which contains leftover chemical of industrial production. Therefore, it is inevitable that they get sick regarding dirty water such as cholera, typhoid and dysentery. These diseases are leading causes of death and kill much many more people than other serious ones such as cancer and heart disease. Another threat is polluted water eliminates water creatures.
Rubbish such as discarded cans, bottles and baby diapers find their way into stomachs of fish and often killing them. Water flows can be stuck and fish's habitat can be occupied by garbage. Chemical from household and production, automobile oil daily washes off into rivers is also one of the important cause of creatures' death.
To solve this problem, the reasons which induce pollute water resources need to be get rid of. Firstly, governments can demand that companies have higher safety standards to protect the environment. For example, all of runoff water has to be processed to remove the toxic substance. The governments can guide and inspect their people for sorting rubbish to avoid them put toxic garbage into landfills. Therefore, the rain can not wash it into rivers. Secondly, to solve the lack of clean water and subsequent diseases, governments need to support the poor both cities and remote villages.
They don't afford to buy processed water so they need to be provided water for free. It is not only humanitarian aids but also the decrease in budget's burden such as paying for them to heal their illness in the future.
Water pollution causes many big consequences for people and natural environments. The problems tend to be more and more serious. However, if people act now, I believe that everything can be resolved gradually.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
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Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13826366559 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58550893303 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601286173633 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5205885097 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.55 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162539070063 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514317052861 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503344318535 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954811496035 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490584155086 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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