It is true that with the rapid development of technology , people have unlimited access to various information and exchange database freely these days.Although the internet brings manifold benefits, its negative side related to control and security of information should not be overlooked.This essay will look into both these aspects till the conclusion is reached.
Firstly, with the development of the internet technology ,Scientists could perform their research more effectively. Secondly,with the easy access to information system, it also helps students in learning new things.To exemplify, There are tonnes of free video websites such as You tube and Vimeo, which they can access and find some informative lessons. In addition , Technology also providing benefits to the government in taking action against illegal immigration , crime and social problems by accessing the central database of citizens through internet.
Internet, however , has its darker side as well. All governments and companies are using computer technology to store and maintain their confidential information these days.Certain people believe that the development can be detrimental for the society as it could be misused for any crime activities.For Instance, a computer hacker might have access to a bank information system and use a person's credit card or debit card number.Moreover, there can also be a security issues in terms of personal information on social networking sites which will have their own repercussions.
In conclusion, Internet has brought in several advantages to the developing nations. However, the problems related to security and control of the people's information would lead to several deleterious problems in the future , Unless and until one is very cautious enough to foresee them and proceed accordingly. Therefore, This essay does not feel that disadvantages of internet outweighs the advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73943661972 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16217921726 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609154929577 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 145.760669728 49.4020404114 295% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 181.111111111 106.682146367 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5555555556 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.2222222222 7.06120827912 258% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253190557659 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967186538077 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456581704319 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149337321834 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354985833955 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.4 13.0946893788 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.09 50.2224549098 46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.6 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.46 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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