Wearing fashionable clothes is becoming important today. Is the attitude to wearing fashionable clothes leading to a positive or negative development?
It has been seen in recent times that people like to wear attire which is in the fashion. Although this tendency is proved to be beneficial for uplifting the living standards of individuals, I believe the drawback of inferiority feeling as well as may follow unethical means to fulfill the desire of wearing branded clothes among those who are unable to purchase these cannot be overlooked.
Inclining towards clothes in the trend helps to uplift the standard of living especially for females. In the past times, when people used to wear only traditional attires, girls were bound to wear only a few kind of clothes, which lead to social inequality. In the present time, owing to inclination of people towards the latest fashion, gender differences are disappearing and women have freedom to get ready in the prevalent attire. Asian countries are good paradigms of this, where the social inequality of dressing up is diminishing due to prevalence of wearing fashionable clothes among the individuals.
I, however, think that the behaviour towards wearing fashionable dresses proves negative for people of under privileged society. Owing to the high prices of clothes in fashion, those, who are under poverty line, cannot afford pay for these clothes. They, substantially, feel inferior than those who attire themselves with trending clothes. For instance, children quite often pester their parents to buy them branded clothes as they think, they will also look attractive by wearing expensive clothes. At times, when the desire is not accomplished, they choose illegal ways to cater their needs. Thus, this attitude likely to lead society in inapproiate means.
In conclusion, despite inclination of people to wear clothes in fashion presents advantage for girls to posses solidarity, I feel disadvantage for poor section of the society for going astray from the right path is too dire to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'few kinds'.
Suggestion: few kinds
...ttires, girls were bound to wear only a few kind of clothes, which lead to social inequa...
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Line 5, column 227, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to pay'
Suggestion: to pay
...o are under poverty line, cannot afford pay for these clothes. They, substantially,...
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Line 5, column 285, Rule ID: SUPERIOR_THAN[1]
Message: The adjective inferior is normally used with 'to'.
Suggestion: to
...hes. They, substantially, feel inferior than those who attire themselves with trendi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, may, so, thus, well, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24918032787 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73086216603 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606557377049 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4354725024 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.153846154 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29017917487 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104445825658 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602946099581 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18244896834 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335366967484 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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