The most precious time in women's life is giving birth to their baby. That period is very crucial in every girl's life. The leave for maternity is more important for working people. In my point of view, There are more advantages than disadvantages. These type of leave will save the life of two persons as well as it effects some loss in business.
The greatest benefit of this is, The women can take care of their baby. There is a law for giving leave to this kind of people. Moreover, the company had the chance to find the new skilled person instead of that person. The another advantage is it reduces the stress of that lady. At that time, the stress will become a major issue to many of the people. For big companies, it is not a big problem and this is a great chance to meet new employees. For instance, the person who take leave for 6monthd should be replaced by the another person with the same range and sort of skills will give a nice experience to the company.
The main disadvantage of this type of holidays mainly effect the low budget companies. Small companies do not have enough budget to increase these types, and replacing the person is also an issue because finding the correct person is more typical task. Then the companies should trainup by showing variety of skills. This training should take along period of time. So, encouraging new one is some crucial task for the company. For example, In the survey that we find in google, says that most of the companies never accept the new person's work instead of their current employee.
In conclusion, some type of companies feel difficult for giving salaries. They should also think this one as their company budget. Then it seem not to be difficult. Here, from my side there are more advantages which outweighs the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'girls'' or 'girl's'?
Suggestion: girls'; girl's
...y. That period is very crucial in every girls life. The leave for maternity is more i...
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Line 2, column 359, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a major issue to many of the people. For big companies, it is not a big problem a...
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Line 2, column 413, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s, it is not a big problem and this is a great chance to meet new employees. For ...
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Line 3, column 349, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...skills. This training should take along period of time. So, encouraging new one is some crucia...
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Line 4, column 139, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'seems'?
Suggestion: seems
...is one as their company budget. Then it seem not to be difficult. Here, from my side...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, sort of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.625 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36932710648 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5125 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5644455405 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.2727272727 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5454545455 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107132711077 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0330941348232 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054110123685 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0754937040642 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446655557703 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.0946893788 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.