What are the advantages and disadvantages of leaving your country to live or study abroad?
Nowadays, an incredible number of people moving to other countries seeking for social welfare, stable economy, education, better job opportunities and the like. It is true that there are some pros and cons for this trade but I believe that the advantages by far outweigh the disadvantages and this will be discussed.
The most important advantage of moving to a foreign country is the chance for studying in prestigious universities where the prominent professors are employing and these will open doors to better job opportunities for the students. Besides, some countries lack the skilled workers and migration can improve their economy by taxing working people. Furthermore, People from different nations learn to live with each other and they get familiar with other cultures, customs and traditions.
There are some disadvantages with regard to moving to other countries that will cause some difficulties for the migrants. The first drawback is language barrier which will have a deterring effect on a fellow's daily life in finding accommodation or job. Moreover, individuals will face culture shock and homesickness that can be debilitating in long term. In addition, the brain drain will be a sophisticated issue for the source country and will cause serious problems in the future such as scarcity in key workers and talented scientists and researchers.
To sum up, moving to other countries becomes part of our daily life and people all over the world facing that in various ways. I believe that there are lots of advantages for this issue and government authorities should think up ideas to tackle the problems in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 200, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a fellow' or simply 'fellows'?
Suggestion: a fellow; fellows
...r which will have a deterring effect on a fellows daily life in finding accommodation or ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, as to, in addition, such as, it is true, to sum up, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23863636364 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86561730025 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587121212121 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6491067394 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.727272727 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132135051975 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493852438207 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340835485804 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0830294994408 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262487559612 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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