What are the advantages and disadvantages of leaving your country to live or study abroad?
In this contemporary era, everyone wants to get settled abroad to live a luxurious life. In this essay, I will discuss the merits and demerits of leaving our nation in the subsequent paragraphs.
There are myriad of benefits to settle in developed countries like the U.S.A, the U.K. First, if anyone is settled in any advanced country then he or she gets a handsome salary and compensation and full fill their all wishes. To illustrate this, one of my friends is settled in the U.S.A. and he has become wealthy. Now, he has everything like cash, assets, house, car and other luxury items. However, one of my cousins is struggling for a house and car because he is living in a home country. Besides this, we can learn many new things about that country. Last but not least; we come to know about different cultures and customs which help in later stages of life.
On the contrary, when we get settled in a different nation, we usually forget not only our customs but also our culture. Moreover, we can miss our parents, relatives, and country. In addition to this, sometimes it is very cumbersome to adjust to new circumstances and atmosphere. One of my friends went to Canada and returned just after three months because he could not adjust there. Apart from that, language is another crucial barrier in adjustment in any foreign county. Lastly, our children also get affected by shifting as they will forget their culture and customs in the near future.
Although, there are numerous advantages to getting settled abroad but on the flip side there are some shortcomings also. So we can conclude that it is a choice of the individual.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, lastly, moreover, so, then, apart from, in addition, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77894736842 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57017483983 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59649122807 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7408929412 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.125 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8125 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0787369020112 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0247977965818 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400196077733 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0640598972492 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439087862359 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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