What are the benefits and disadvantages of tourists who visit other places?
In recent decades, the living conditions of people are getting better. This leads to the fact that travel demands rise dramatically. From my perspective, the developments generate advantages and drawbacks for holidaymakers. In the following essay, I will present reasons to show both sides of the phenomenon.
On the one hand, it is unable to deny the fact that visitors would reap enormous merits from this change. Firstly, travelers not only be unwinded after the long period of working but also be discovered new lands, which means they could pave the way for the growth of the tourism industry where they come. Secondly, these tours will widen their horizons about attractions, including cuisines, culture, and relationships together with new experiences. Without journeys, a variety of people may be lacked social skills as well as easy to be isolated when they step into the real world.
On the other hand, despite the obvious optimistic of traveling, its negatives should be not ignored. Initially, the culture differences sometimes are the most difficult due to they do not how to behave with native citizens who have a dissimilar custom with them, therefore they are alienated from these residents. Not to mention that unlike language can make communication between tourists and hostiles become a challenge. As a result, the places which they visit will leave a bad impression on them.
In conclusion, the demerits and positives of holidaymakers who make a tour to other areas are unavoidable and they should accept what will happen with them. Besides, the careful preparation before each trip maybe help them to prevent the culture shock.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24344569288 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88886191298 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674157303371 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1743070436 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.666666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0996224824317 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0280607166202 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530840792733 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0599061315637 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605177400293 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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