What are the benefits of living in big cities as opposed to rural areas?
What are the problems of rural areas and how can they be solved?
Development is a key towards success. In order to reach the pinnacle of success, every human being is seeking for profound living standards such as jobs, medicals, education and lifestyle.
To begin with, majority of people prefer to live in big cities because of plethora of technology and advancement. Better living standards and high paid jobs in big cities decline a person's mind to live in rural areas. Apart from this, medical advancement is a boon for big cities which helps alot during critical situation where as in rural areas there are no good hospitals to cure a person and save his life.
Apart from above mentioned advancements, Education is a major source of awareness which cannot be seen in rural areas on that higher level which has been touched by big cities. Due to the lack of education, large number of people become partially reaquaint. For example, it can be seen that many farmers from rural areas do not know the better techniques of farming due to the inadequate knowledege of such techniques.
To tackle above conditions, government have to take some stringent actions such as by charging less taxes as compare to big cities or by providing affordable lands in small cities in order to make small cities liveable and ammiable to those who does not wish to live there.
Conclusively, I would like to accentuate the fact that amenities of big cities are the biggest area of consideration to live in. However, it should be equally given to small and big cities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'mind living'.
Suggestion: mind living
...id jobs in big cities decline a persons mind to live in rural areas. Apart from this, medica...
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Line 3, column 324, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...ch helps alot during critical situation where as in rural areas there are no good hospit...
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'so', 'apart from', 'for example', 'such as', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.255395683453 0.247107183377 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.158273381295 0.155533422707 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.13309352518 0.0946595960268 141% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0323741007194 0.0501214627716 65% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0143884892086 0.0437548338989 33% => OK
Prepositions: 0.147482014388 0.122226691241 121% => OK
Participles: 0.0431654676259 0.0403226058552 107% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.65118342418 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0575539568345 0.0326793684256 176% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0611510791367 0.0861772015684 71% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0143884892086 0.021408717616 67% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0179856115108 0.011925033212 151% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1496.0 1933.35771543 77% => OK
No of words: 255.0 316.048096192 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86666666667 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.325490196078 0.374742101984 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.227450980392 0.28420135186 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.16862745098 0.203846283523 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.121568627451 0.137316102897 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65118342418 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.037074148 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.56093040696 107% => OK
Word variations: 62.8396697747 60.7387585426 103% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0891783567 68% => OK
Sentence length: 23.1818181818 20.7743622355 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4808489374 49.517814964 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0 127.492653851 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 20.7743622355 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.636363636364 0.814263465372 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 45.926916221 49.1944974215 93% => OK
Elegance: 2.17543859649 1.69124875643 129% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.449028241409 0.332605444948 135% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.13738521059 0.102741220458 134% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0456550595814 0.0668466124924 68% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.671257906498 0.534860350844 126% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.162312176912 0.148594505496 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191350272605 0.134430193775 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785710764426 0.0742795772207 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.240709692419 0.324371583561 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0754565578765 0.0638462369009 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262523657989 0.228012699653 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0914008014256 0.058150111329 157% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.4468937876 77% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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