Money is a good way to buy and sale any kind of commodity and service. People can use money to fulfil their basic need. Even, without it the survival rate of life become zero.So, they play very significant role in overall society. On the other hand, I believe that, solely money is not the right way to persuasive or happiness. Good deeds, valuable rules are also necessary for healthy living.
According to my point of view, we can use the money in the better way. Firstly, not only individual whearas, government have instead to right invest the money on different schemes and projects. It will decrease the ratio of unemployment and poverty. Moreover, we can invest money on the social welfare and help those people who are really needy and they want shutter. Balance position is really important for any economical surface. I beleive that, better education service is enchance the quality of academic study ratio in all over the world. So, try to invest it. Hospital and government service can also be improve just because of right form of investment. Even, there are plethora amount of things we can improve with the help of money.
On the other hand, Can you believe that? Only money is the right way to earn happiness. I don't think so. There are many thing we can do for inner satisfaction. Honesty is the one of the important factior to established and maintained positive relationship among the people. Moreover, humanity, friendship and many more characteristics give you more happiness and persuasion rather than money.
I put it in nutshell, I pen down saying that, both are really important factor nowadays.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, really, so, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90579710145 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60765881166 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579710144928 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6758669055 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.4761904762 106.682146367 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1428571429 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52380952381 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193952774917 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055277843457 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409884798612 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11708251202 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043976420078 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.31 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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