What do you think would be the advantages and disadvantages of this policy?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In this expensive era, both the parent has to work hard to meet the basic needs of the family, which affects the nurturing of young children. Section of society believes that one parent should remain at home to take care of the child and thus, the government should compensate the salary. This suggestion would definitely help the family to provide better grooming to the child without compromising over financial aspects; however, it would certainly have some of the drawbacks. This essay would explain few of them with relevant examples.
Firstly, since working parent has to struggle hard to maintain work-life balance, therefore, such policy would relief for group of people who fails to do create the equilibrium. For instance, people are so busy with their work and they hardly have time to spend with their kids, and thus end up in sending them to day care centres from the early age. This result in less bonding between the parent and child and the research suggest that in the race of earning more for providing better future, they actually end up in spoiling their present. If a parent is allowed to sit at home and still receive compensation from the authorities, then the same time spent on their children will be helpful in the development of positive behaviour.
On the other hand, such kind of dependency would lead to some drawbacks. It would be additional economical as well as laborious burden on the government, if a country is populous. Additionally, as these days everybody prefer to achieve their professional goals, therefore, it would be difficult for both the parents to decide who should sacrifice their job to take care of the kids.
To conclude, providing financial support to the working parents would ease the nurturing of the child, however, it need to planned properly to deal with accompany demerits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, however, if, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, as to, for instance, kind of, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97077922078 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6099595013 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564935064935 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.0714270333 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.583333333 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122148904199 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500977842678 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0290311408166 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0726702115386 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282748366268 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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