When families have a meal together it is considered social activity. Do you think eating
together is important to people in your country?
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">When families have a meal together it is considered social activity. Do you think eating
together is important to people in your country?
Nowadays, families enjoy a social gathering rather than a long distance communication. Present urban culture induces social engagement within various relatives and sibblings that involes having a meal together. I strongly believe that this is a critical factor in keeping long lasting relationships and preserving their heritage.
Lets take a closer look on the impact of socialising within the family.
In India, festivals are the main occasions to highlight and indulge in the country's culture. For example, during Diwali many Indians take this opputunity to meet their relatives and share the joy of the festival of lights. Firstly, by inviting them over to please themselves and the young ones by lighting firecrakers and sharing sweets. Secondly, having conversations and sharing each others thoughts. Ultimately, followed by waves of lip smaking snacks and delicious home cooked cusines.
In cities like Mumbai, where most indivduals have a busy life, people tend to find time to suprise their sibblings on their birthdays. This is usually, followed by a party which includes drinks and having meals together. People often utilise this time to connect with each other and reflect the importance of that person in their lives.
Indians who live abraod, generally tend to socialise with their relatives and friends over barbeque parties. Especially in Singapore, where one can convinietly book a Barbeque-grill pit by the East Coast Park beach. This illustrates, that the culture mainly revolves around the variety of food they enjoy.
It is clear from the above points that having family gathering is become a social aspect of an individual. Sharing lunch and dinner time together contributes to better bonding and preserving the national culture relevant to their region. Therefore, eating together is of critical importance in my country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...onships and preserving their heritage. Lets take a closer look on the impact of soc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56369426752 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00115770054 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614649681529 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.7246403883 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.35 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301750918299 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805657907291 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123635786979 0.0667982634062 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157570391892 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.163558137173 0.056905535591 287% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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