Without capital punishment our lives are less secure and the number of crime increases.Thus, capital punishment is essential to control violence in the society.To what extent do you agree or disagree.
In current world and especially in my country, we often read about the news of the crime. In absence of some major sentence for the crime, it is not safe to live in outside world. In my opinion, there must be some strict rules for the crime. However, not only capital punishment, but laws must be equal for all.
Some part of the folk accord that, there must be an aggressive action for the all crime, whether it is small or big, knowingly or unknowingly. There are multifarious reasons for that, first and foremost is to control the violence. Secondly, if there are no such actions taken then every third person who is unemployed will choose the path of crime. Then, there will be chaos around everywhere. By taking necessary steps, means change in some laws will definitely affect the crime rate.
Now, there is second which can be considered as the salient factor to control the violence in the normal living life is that there must equality between all in terms of laws. By means, at the time of punishment without considering the person's identity, there must be a common law for all. For instance, if a crime has been done by a famous celebrity then the punishment will be the same for them too. Then and then the crime rate will decrease and it will definitely set the example for common people.
To recapitulate, to overcome from the violence in the current world and to have a peaceful environment, not only to implement the strict rules for punishments but the laws must be common for all. That will certainly help the society and make it peaceful to all.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Message: Use simply 'celebrity'.
Suggestion: celebrity
...instance, if a crime has been done by a famous celebrity then the punishment will be the same fo...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'third', 'for instance', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.182108626198 0.247107183377 74% => OK
Verbs: 0.130990415335 0.155533422707 84% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0798722044728 0.0946595960268 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0766773162939 0.0501214627716 153% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0255591054313 0.0437548338989 58% => OK
Prepositions: 0.130990415335 0.122226691241 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0255591054313 0.0403226058552 63% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.44968761024 2.80594681477 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0255591054313 0.0326793684256 78% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.130990415335 0.0861772015684 152% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0447284345048 0.021408717616 209% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.00958466453674 0.011925033212 80% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1578.0 1933.35771543 82% => OK
No of words: 280.0 316.048096192 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63571428571 6.12580529183 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.285714285714 0.374742101984 76% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.192857142857 0.28420135186 68% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.132142857143 0.203846283523 65% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0892857142857 0.137316102897 65% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44968761024 2.80594681477 87% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.037074148 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525 0.56093040696 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 52.0418140786 60.7387585426 86% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.6666666667 20.7743622355 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6999860062 49.517814964 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.2 127.492653851 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7743622355 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.733333333333 0.814263465372 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 37.9523809524 49.1944974215 77% => OK
Elegance: 1.45205479452 1.69124875643 86% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340030055902 0.332605444948 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.162840491565 0.102741220458 158% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0594512990787 0.0668466124924 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.571487995755 0.534860350844 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.139944027878 0.148594505496 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148384014402 0.134430193775 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633707881406 0.0742795772207 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.454597029686 0.324371583561 140% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0744061477361 0.0638462369009 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25227362345 0.228012699653 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0151094245551 0.058150111329 26% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.68436873747 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 1.0 5.90881763527 17% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.5751503006 272% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 8.0 10.4468937876 77% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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